Mata Adam memandang tajam ke arah Hisyam. Hisyam kelihatan
lemah dan memeluk tubuh, mengecilkan dirinya.
Kemarahan terserlah di wajah, sesekali matanya terpejam sambil
terkumat-kamit sesuatu. Angin kuat memekakkan alam.
“Syam!” Aku memekik dan mereka berpaling kearah aku.
Muka Hisyam bertukar pucat sebaik sahaja mata kami bertemu.
Aku berdiri perlahan-lahan menahan diri dari diterbangkan ribut gila.
“Mikael, please!” Adam memandang aku.
“Adam dah bersetuju,” mata milik Adam kembali memandang Hisyam.
Tiba-tiba Hisyam menyeringai seram.
“NO NO, Syam?!” mataku terbeliak, aku tak keruan.
Tiba-tiba juga Hisyam lemah, tersenyum.
“It’s okay, Dani! Aku dah dapat dia.”
Lantas menjatuhkan dirinya ke dalam lubang neraka.
ps: cite ni bukan idea asal ak,,cter ni kalu sape prasan adalah American tv shows, Supernatural. Aku nk praktis tulis dlm BM tp yg ni yg kuar, ak xleh come up ngan idea sndiri lagi, so for the mean time ak gne ni dlu.
Writing 100 words exact or below is really hard when I suddenly have all the words I wanted to describe the moments..guhhhh.. so this is not my own story, but the words are mine. I want to use something to jump start me in writing in my native language, and this happened. This isn't my first. I've written something that touches me when watching Supernatural, and it came to me naturally when I lay my hands on this keyboard to write. I never written any angsty, action or action fantasy or thriller before both in English and BM, but I should try someday.
Aku tercungap, berselang selikan dengan nafas yang ditarik
dalam. Perasaan yang entah tidak bernama, bercampur
baur. Air mata yang mula bertakung aku kesat dengan lengan baju aku
yang kasar seperti denim.
Aku kebalkan diri. Luka-luka dalam dan lebam-lebam biru
bertukar kebas. Hanya perit di dalam hati yang terasa.
Apabila langkah semakin kecil aku berhenti dan bersembunyi di
sebalik bangkai kereta buruk. Aku mengintai dan aku nampak
Adam. Tapi dia bukan lagi Adam. Aku nampak belakang
Hisyam. Dada aku ketat.
Angin semakin kuat, seperti ribut, menerbangkan apa-apa yang
menghalang dan dihumbankan ke dalam lubang berapi marak di tengah-tengah Adam
dan Hisyam.
Kepingan memo kuning ini aku letak kembali di atas meja. Puas aku cuba memahami kod-kod rahsia ini tetapi semakin lama aku tenung semakin fikiran aku entah kemana-mana.
Aku gerakkan jemariku, mengurut dahi.
“Eh Dani, kau tak tidur ke semalam?” tanya Sham.
Aku hanya diam, tidak berminat.
Sambil menarik kerusi, Sham mendengus. Sham memandang abangnya yang kini berpura-pura sibuk.
“Dani, kalau kau masih marah pasal tu, aku minta maaf tapi there’s no taking back.”
“Sham, listen, aku just fikir yang kau akan buat benda sama kat aku kalau kau kat tempat aku.”
“Nope, Dani.”
Remuk hati seorang abang.
Ps: eh why do I messed up in the POV?? I cant make up my mind, What should I do??
Hisyam, dia adik aku. Satu-satunya yang aku ada sekarang.
Aku masih ingat malam itu. Bapak tiba-tiba datang menjemput aku pulang setelah dua bulan aku di sana.
Kenapa?
Aku dah senang kat sana. Pak Hasan sangat memahami dan Judi… dia cinta pertama aku. Aku mengintai dari dalam. Terlihat kereta bapak. Aku keberatan. Kemudian aku nampak Hisyam dengan roket kertas kesayangannya. Aku tersenyum dalam kesayuan. Aku tahu. Aku harus pulang.
Semalam dia terlantar. Tenat, kata doktor. Tapi jauh-jauh aku tolak idea itu. Jantung.
Aku memilih untuk kembali kepada saat tembakan maut itu dilepaskan.
So hey~ I am currently at the 9th season of Supernatural. I'm like way back behind but I don't mind this, I'm proud of myself and also sometimes got shocked with spoiler around the net, no one to blame. This season, it is overwhelming, intense, sad, pain & etc. Great plot tho I have a few questions here and there but I dont want to spoil the fun, get along.
Not very long time ago I found a vid clip of narration. It got me the first time I saw the clip, and back then I was in the earlier seasons if not mistaken. But then I decided to find again and I found it and how the video clip gives me a much clearer view of what it is about. I love the narration, the montage of Dean's hurting in and out, it really is about him hurting, restless, hopeless and while writing this I am putting the clip on loop. The piano and her voice are really perfect together makes we want to find Dean and be there for him, I cried. Ya these later seasons got me crying a lot and I admit I am highly get touchy2 and all.
It's like you're screaming and no one can hear..
You almost feel ashamed that someone could be that important
that without them you feel like nothing
no one will never understand how much it hurts
you feel hopeless
but nothing can save you
and when it's over and it is gone
you almost wish that you could have all that bad stuff back
so you can have the good.
After I watched most of the scenes included in above clip, I understand that this piece is really about him and in few episodes when Sam finally understand what's been happening and how he is so pissed at Dean and said how he really ready to die and Dean won't let that happen.
"You almost feel ashamed that someone could be that important
that without them you feel like nothing"
above lines, exactly what Sam had dropped on him. If we look on both Dean and Sam's views, Sam would say that Dean is like that, Sam said in 9.13: "I was ready to die. I was ready. I should have died, but you... You didn't want to be alone, and that's what all this boils down to. You can't stand the thought of being alone". I was like HOW COULD YOU, SAM! and Dean was like or was I, I was like yaa Dean cannot stand the idea of being alone, but that's true but he wants to save you and he believes that you can be saved...Dean is selfish to Sam, but idk ,,he's your brother and to Dean, Sam is like everything to him even Sam cannot hear him screaming.,and that last part of that episode when Sam said he wouldn't do the same for Dean. you just break your only brother's heart there. And along the episode, scenes, before this one, Dean is actually been thinking how Sam said "if you want work, then we work, but if you want to be brothers..*silence*" This one uwaaaaaa, "And I was just being honest" he said.. Ya of course Dean didn't get to sleep that night,,
It's like if I know there's still chances, I'd choose to be selfish just for the other person to be back on feet. Sam also being a selfish dude when he decided to let things go and to die...he wasn't trying hard enough I guess. Both of them are in great distressed and all, time is running out and all ya it's super tough.
for the clip, who ever made this, wrote this, I want to like be friends with and share our thoughts or something cuz right now I have no one to share my thoughts about this series, amazing. Of course other series are just as great and it is just me who do not have the time in the world for them all. I know I'd fall in love with every single of them but for now I decide not to. Besides I am a slow watcher *if that's a word*
even Sam cannot hear him screaming.,and that last part of that episode when Sam said he wouldn't do the same for Dean. 