Wednesday, July 18, 2018

How to Write Like Them

Just found this girl, I've been seeing her videos thumbnail but I never really have the need to click on how to write song because I don't write (I wish I am).  Then just now,  I watched Billie Eilish's Watch live then this girl came surfacing again and so I clicked.  I was curious and I love to hear what others have to say especially when they describe their types of songs and the voice and stuff.  It helps.  Jules is talented and observant.  Love what she came up with.  I really want to be able to capture and write down her comments but I can't hahha


How to write like Billie Eilish


Buzzkill

Honey, don't stick around tonight
I'll be over there don't come and find me
Darling, there's no need to hold me tight
You know I've always been the best at hiding
I'll be busy Saturday, I'll be washing my hair

I'll be stuck in traffic 
so don't wait till I get there
Baby, if I'm honest
means a lot how much you care

but if you want to hold me down
be might as well be a gunpoint
(pow pow)
if you want to share my crown
off with your head would be fun boy
you find my body 
....
more space in the grave..

but honestly babe, 
when you love me that way
it's kind of a buzzkill


Jules said she needed to cuss for this song, because it would not be Melanie's song if you don't cuss.  Hahah
How to write like Melanie Martinez

Kitty Pool

I can't believe that I fell so deep
baby I thought you were perfect for me
I've never been one to dive in so dangerously

running on bare feet 
on the wet concrete
blow whistle blow cause 
this rush is so exhilarating 

but when I hit the water
It hurt like a bitch
baby now I see through your chlorine

baby why did I jump 
off your high dive
I hit the water
and bled like a fool

Baby why did I fall for your false height
found out how shallow
now I know the truth

I fell head first 
into your kitty pool (2x)


I love the lyric so so bad, it is so Melanie!

Tuesday, July 17, 2018

Poem: #52poetry XII


This Bit


Went to make copies
A boy who works offered cheese wafer
Gladly accepted 

Unknown, never taught him
But he knows me for sure
Since I give lessons

guess this is a perk
to work as one around them
I've came to enjoy
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